Looking at our homework

Thursday 06 October 2016

Written by Natalia, Y6:

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This week’s homework was to write ten sentences about our trip to Eden Camp. We all looked at each others’ and marked them. I swapped with Mia, Ava and Sarah. When we were marking them, we chose our three favourite sentences – they were amazing. We always write a star and a step which helps tell us what we are doing well and what we are doing not so well.

This is my favourite one that Mia wrote: “Quickly, scared but exited, we rushed through the Blitz a number of times.”

Moortown Primary School, Leeds
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