Homework Review

Friday 12 October 2018

We really enjoyed reading all of our stories in this week’s homework review. There were some fantastic tales that really showed off the writing we’ve worked on so far this year.

First, we summarised our story for the people on our table using only ten words. Then, we swapped with someone else on our table and told them what we liked about it.

We then had the chance to wander around the class to get a snippet from lots of people’s before settling down to read another one and tell them what we thought.

We nominated stories to be shared on the website, giving reasons why we felt that story should be shared.

Farai’s was nominated because Thomas felt like he’d written like a Tom Gates story and he loved the cliff hanger.

Kai’s was nominated by Martha because he’d put lots of effort in and used great adjectives.

Lory’s was chosen by Rohan because it was action-packed.

Josh’s was chosen by Farai because he used some great verbs and sentence openers.

Moortown Primary School, Leeds
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