Some great examples of narrative writing typed up for Class News by Henka and Liam.
Dobby the Brave
by Henka
One miserable evening, the elves were gathered in the palace on top of the toadstool blundering about Fenris and what to do with the powerful, massive wolf. They figured that they needed a magical rope, forged by goblins, to tie Fenris up. A shrill voice broke the silence: “Let me go! I will get the rope and trap the mighty wolf!”. Dobby’s voice broke the sullen silence. Although Dobby barely had anything to help him except a hat, that allowed him to fly and a wrankin, a race of animals that have parts of different creatures – elephant, unicorn, snake, T-Rex, werewolf and sabre-toothed tiger. Although it is dangerous, it is quite gentle. Dobby ran out of the castle and set off to find the rope.
Dobby travelled far and wide looking for the golden rope. He passed valleys, crossed rivers and walked through deserts. When walking, he encountered villagers who pressed juicy plums and long baguettes into his cold and shaky hands. He ate these contentedly and carried on his journey. When they reached Neilfam, the home of frost giants and a really cold, windy and snowy place, was when Wig loses Dobby’s hat. He blew out his trunk which made the magical hat fly away and Dobby plummeted to the ground! Wig just managed to save his master but the hat was nowhere to be seen. Dobby sat and cried and cried and cried until he had no more tears to cry.
Crump and Wadela’s Adventure
by Liam
One freezing cold night, the fierce warriors met in their ruined house to make a plan to defeat the evil, ugly goblins. The warriors angrily and loudly discussed a plan.
In angry voices, the other warriors said Crump should go and get the diamond, shimmering crystal. Crump felt scared. But he wanted to see the crystal first, so he snatched Wadela’s hands and set off nervously. Crump walked through the gloomy, damp forest with his four-legged, horn-headed friend. For the next two days, they travelled across swing bridges, over steep mountains, shadowy lakes and icy rivers. As they travelled, people pressed smelly cheese, brown crusty bread and clear water into hands.