Writing: escaping a volcanic eruption!

Friday 24 January 2025

This week, Year 4 have been writing their recounts about escaping a volcanic eruption. This links nicely to our volcanoes topic in geography this half-term.

A recount re-tells events and describes what happened.

Our R2s (remember to) were:

Your children used these R2s when planning, writing and editing their recounts. I was wowed by the final pieces! Your children really put themselves in the shoes of an escapee and were able to write exciting and gripping recounts.

Help at home: ask your children to write a short recount of their day at school using conjunctions and past tense.

Coordinating conjunctions:

What is FANBOYS? | English | Teaching Wiki - Twinkl

Subordinating conjunctions:

Subject: English Learning Intention: To Be Able To (TBAT) use subordinating  conjunctions. Subordinating conjunctions A conjuncti

Moortown Primary School, Leeds
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