Writing: Chocolate Cake by Michael Rosen

Friday 02 May 2025

Year 4 are currently writing a narrative inspired by Chocolate Cake by Michael Rosen.

A narrative is a story and its purpose is interest and entertain.

We’ve watched Michael Rosen perform this poem and your children love it! Give it a watch here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tWrOeNKvtHI&t=46s

Our narrative is going to be about sneaking into the teacher’s staffroom and stealing a delicious treat. To help inspire this, your children got to take a sneaky trip into the staffroom to see what it’s really like.

We’ve been practising direct speech lots this week as we want to include that in our narratives. I’ve been really impressed with how well your children have grasped this as it can be tricky!

Help at home: have a brief conversation with your children and ask them to write it down using direct speech. Make sure they use all our R2s above!

Moortown Primary School, Leeds
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