Writing: Francis

Friday 27 February 2026

This week, Year 5 have started their new writing topic. Over the next three weeks, the children will write a short narrative which creates tension and suspense. We used an animated video as our stimulus which was sourced from the Literacy Shed.

This film is perfect at building tension: the narrator uses pauses and varies the speed at which he speaks in order to build the suspense. As well as speech used to create tension, the music also plays a key part in creating suspense.

Help at home: Watch the video with and without music. How does this alter the tension created?

Moortown Primary School, Leeds
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